I’d like to start off by saying I have nearly 28 images I saved for possible book covers for Finding Fiona. My husband probably has 5-10. I’m showing you just a few.
First, I requested one from the lovely Fena Lee. I wanted to see what she came up with, and I assured her that if I used the cover for my ebook, I’d compensate her. She made me this:
Now, I really liked the picture (found here), but to me, this didn’t really say “Science Fiction/Adventure.” It seemed more literary to me. My husband took the picture and made this cover:
But we essentially had the same problem. It didn’t fit with the genre. Some people on Critique Circle forums suggest a superimposed face. They liked the fire image, but it needed more.
I played around with some models (found the stock photo on deviantart):
To a few people, the model seemed too complacent, not like she was a character in a story where her life is in danger. So, I found a new model from a stock photo I downloaded from istockphoto.com. The model looked a bit older, but when combined with the fire, she had the appearance of looking younger.
I really liked this model, but I also loved, loved, loved the book cover for The Venom of Vipers by K.C. May. I wanted the full face on the book cover. Well, I tried a few times to get the face to look good with the fire, but I finally handed it over to my husband and told him what I wanted. He flexed his mad skills with Photoshop, and gave me this gem:
Now, he gave me another book cover that looked almost exactly the same, but I asked him to increase the contrast to make the colors more extreme. I considered having “Fiona” bold instead of “Finding”, but “Finding” won. And now this is the official book cover! The only thing I might change: I may add a caption or a quote from a review along the top.
That’s how the cover for Finding Fiona developed. There were many more drafts, but these are the non-embarrassing ones






Hey that’s awesome!
I saw one of the early choices–I think it was the second one, or a variant on it–and I remember thinking: “Not bad, but missing…something.”
I love the way it ended up coming out, great choice with the face and the glow on the font really pulls the eye to the title.
Hi Emily,
You definitely ended up with the best one; it’s more dynamic and powerful. You stuck with some of the good qualities you started off with as well. Increasing the size of your name was a good idea.
I can’t believe how little prominence the covers have on Kindle, though. All the detail gets lost and you can’t read anything small, which is often the author names and quotes. A great cover is still important for when you’re not using your Kindle or iphone etc …